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document.writeln("断的伤：");
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document.writeln("2016-10-12 13:32:56");
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document.writeln("感觉改了之后就成白话文了");
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document.writeln("溪边：");
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document.writeln("2016-10-13 00:05:37");
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document.writeln("改了后，没有神态容貌，不能体现他们的精神状态与性格，这是为后文埋伏笔铺垫");
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document.writeln("冷青灰：");
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document.writeln("2016-10-13 01:24:34");
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document.writeln("有些外貌神态描写还是需要的，太简单，也很枯燥。没有细节，就乏味可陈。");
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